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I saw the thumbnail, and immediately knew I was gonna see some gold. Gotta say, happy to be correct.

The character design fits very well with the art style, and I love the attitude you gave her, its a very nice mix of calm yet cool, without showing any sense of apathy.
Your work on the lighting is very impressive as well. Its very cool to see the light flash rapidly as she is welding, it helps give a sense of intensity that I really like, while not being overwhelming or conflicting with her personality.
You also have very good keyframes, the posing combined with the timing convey her actions very well, and really show what her personality is about. You have a very good grasp on how to convey a character through animation.
If this is an animation test, I can understand the lack of inbetweens, but adding a few more inbetweens here in there could really make this even better.
Lastly, this would benefit greatly from sound effects. She is listening to music, so it would add to her character even more if we heard the music she was listening to, whilst hearing the welding as well.

Outside of that, top notch animation! I really do believe you should continue 2d animation, you've got good talent and a great grasp on key posing and timing, two very essential things.

GiftedArt responds:

wow thank you! your words are very encouraging.

Very fun short.

I really do like that you went with a storyboard style here, the "sound effects" and art style are very charming, and I really love the character designs.
I do love the idea of a guy who lives in a cartoon world, and just doesn't fucking care about the bullshit around him, it's really funny and serves as a good mockery of cartoon tropes.
For something that is in the style of storyboarding, you also have really good composition! You know when to hide stuff from the camera, and know when to reveal stuff, that kind of knowledge really does add to the comedy of this.

I'm gonna follow you, because I wanna see where this is gonna go. Also, be careful with where you leave your coffee, you don't want it to accidentally spill on your work.

Happy birthday!

I can tell that you're probably new to animation, but I might be wrong.
The only animation is from the candle and the flickering shadow. The candle feels lifeless at the moment, it's only making small movements back and forth, and doesn't really feel like a candle. As for the shadow, I like the little detail of it flickering, but only the shadow on the wall flickers, none of the others do. It feels inconsistent. I would definitely recommend trying to study how a candle fire moves around to get a better grasp on how to animate it.

As for the composition, it feels lackluster. There is no sense of place here, it could either be inside of a building or out on the street, and the silhouettes just feel like they've been placed hap-hazardly, with no reason. I would definitely recommend trying to look into what makes good composition, stuff like the rule of thirds, and also looking at photographs or other drawings of birthday parties can help give you an understanding of what gives good composition.

Sorry for being so harsh here, but I do think that your art-style and character design are somewhat cute, and I think that you do have potential to be a great artist

TheMineroxl responds:

no problem, and thank you

Recent Game Reviews

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I love this game, it's simple yet addicting, the art is nice and the controls are easy to learn

Miroff responds:

Thank You!

I like the game, the art is amazing, music is based, and the level select screen reminds me of Super Mario 3D Land, my only problem is that it's too easy. The dispensers remove any resource management, because if you run out of eggs, just use a dispenser and refill completely. Still a good game though

Recent Art Reviews

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what is he sitting on?

i absolutely adore this

Maxfilm responds:

Thanx!
You made me happy :3

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Romanian animator and artist, I mainly use Krita to draw and animate

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